Good morning darlin’ Readers! I am happy to announce I did indeed get some sleep last night. Huzzah! Early indicators are revealing a slow work day which will drain me as fast as not getting sleep, but I hope to entertain myself for a while to stave off the mental starvation caused by counting ceiling tiles.
This morning I am preparing to list CRANK on www.webfictionguide.com and I need your help. Yes, you. Don’t look away, I see you there. All I ask is that you read the blurb below and tell me what you think of it. This is the description I’ll be submitting with the request to add CRANK to WFG.com.
Is it catchy? Would it entice you to read the story? What can be improved? Does it say too much? Not enough?
These are just examples of what I’d like to know. Feel free to say whatever comes to mind. The Reader is who I’m after, so don’t be shy if you don’t write. Let’s have it!
Please and Thank You!
(Note: This is an updated blurb. Some of the comments addressed the first one. It was with that help that I present the following attempt.)
Crandall Jacobson doesn’t believe in vampires. His life is singing for Inertia Stand, a band he loves even if he hates the name. His best friend and drummer appears to have the same lust for music but he has a secret: He’s a vampire hunter.
When a routine staking goes awry, and a vampire sinks her teeth into Crandall, Mike learns there is more to his best friend than he ever imagined.
(Contains explicit gay content and sexy manlove.)